Brainstorming for draft 2 for the long essay. Try listing some of the feelings/ideas you want your essay to be about, identifying "scenes" to create the experience of those feelings/ideas, listing some metaphors in your feelings & ideas that will "carry" your concept. This may not be the way you usually write - but see what you can do with it.
For this draft I plan to talk about my child hood and how I grew into who I am today. I was a shy child and didnt speak to anyone. I want to capture the change from then to now.
I was a young shy girl in my elementary school years. Talking was the scariest thing for me. I never spoke to my classmates or teachers from pre school through to 4th grade. People began to think I was mute and didnt have the ability to speak., but I did. At home I was a chatterbox with my family. they were familiar to me. I guess I didn't like new faces. After all I was taught never to talk to strangers. to this day I cant seem to grasp why i never spoke and that is what I want to try to figure out in writing this.
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